It's True!!!

I don't exactly know
what this is yet,
But it's surely plain for everyone to see
that I'm loving it,
Whatever "it" is...

Never have I felt these types of strings
pull at my heart,
And so quickly
so fiercely,
And as though you needn't try
needn't push things.
Just let it all...
f
l
o
w
.
.
.

Yeah, that's right.
Just go with the flow.
Things always work out that way.

But I'm feeling like this poem...
sucks.
If you could even call it that,
a poem.
But then
who even decides what makes a poem...
a poem?

I'm thinking to hard
aren't I?
But that's exactly what I shouldn't be doing,
thinking.
Just let it all flow,
remember?

Okay then, I'll admit it...
I'm in lust with you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There,
I've said it!
Ha!!

You make me want to
BURST!!!!
and shoot happiness out
all over everywhere!!

And I'm not even sure
if you've realized it yet,
But you've super glued this real life smile
to my usually fake and sedated face.

So thank you love,
Keep up the good work...please =]

Responses

2 comments so far.

1. 4 SUGAR BEAR says:

   I like this.... Letting it FLOWWWwwwWWWwwwWWWwwwWWW...
   Many points, I found interesting... especially the final confession, followed by the flowing scroll..... down.
   Good Job... ~PEACE OUT

2. roy k austin says:

   there are basic canons to the craft of poetry-if you are not sure. free verse requires craft and form even more.chopped up prose is not one of them. read the greats and aspire to them. best....roy...........................