Sea What I Mean?

You never seen the big blue!
I live on it, so I find it hard to be true
You can do so much
boogie board, sand castles and such
It is so fun,
so fun to play in water under the sun
in the light it's shiny and sheen
you have to go to the water, don't you sea what I mean?

Responses

6 comments so far.

1. Kelly Hernandez says:

   Good job :)

   I never was a fan of the ocean, however I do appreciate another's love for such a beautiful thing.

2. Jake LeClair says:

   Thanks, I live on the coast, and my girlfriend just showed me this site. So your the first comment I've ever gotten.

3. 4 SUGAR BEAR says:

   I too live on the coast, and I enjoy the beauty of the Ocean and it's view. I particularly enjoy, the sea treasures found along the rocks and sand. Unfortunately. I am more of a lake fan, when it comes to dipping those piggy toes. This is a nice write... ~PEACE OUT

4. the lover says:

   4 SUGER BEAR hi! this is the guy i wrote my poem about and jake i really like it!^_^

5. Abbie says:

   i love how oyu describe the ocean... to make it seem calm and peacefull

6. Abbie says:

   i love how oyu describe the ocean... to make it seem calm and peacefull