Ode to ~enyaw~
Oh, enyaw.
How I pray for you,
hoping your pain will stray.
You've helped me start
and I've helped you grow.
We are friends now
some how.
I dont trust anyone with my poems
and yet I find myself
putting more and more on for you.
To read.
To comment.
To criticise.
To ponder.
To even cherish.
So maybe
in this messed up world
there is hope. Where?
In a little comment you made,
in a poem you wrote,
in a life you've touched,
in you.
Thank you ~enyaw~ for inspiring my best works.
This poem was written by Artemis Fowl III on Jun 06, 2007.
Responses
5 comments so far.
It's touching; especially when and only when it comes from the heart!
Oh, I love this part "in this messed up world
there is hope. Where?
In a little comment you made,
in a poem you wrote,
in a life you've touched,
in you." I appreciate the kind words, but I feel you give me too much credit. The poetry you write comes from "your" heart and as Niko stated, that is when it the best.
enyaw
what u dont understand is i write from the heart. all uve done is inspired me to let out my feelings. the ode is a way to let out my feelings.
very nice!
Ha, it just makes me happy to read this... that can only be a good thing