a temporary placebo

smoking pain away,
drink to delay just one more day,
when that stops and you face reality,
Is this the life of want, of like, of need,
of course its not,
thats why one smokes that weed,
drinking the alcahol,
those don't help when starting to fall,
so why does one laugh?
Does it transcend to make life go fast?
A smile to merely comfort peers,
Fool them think I'm happy
drink my beers,
and disguise tears.
aware this isn't the life wish had, temptations can't keep from sad.
known not takin seriously,
lost grip on reallity.
now seek flea from this society

Responses

6 comments so far.

1. Morgan Morrone says:

   I really like this, you have a really amazing way of writing

2. Kevin Davis says:

   Good job, i like it. It seems honest and i think we all can relate at some point or another.

3. Ray Ray says:

   Wow, extremely good. :] -Ray

4. erica crespo says:

   this is great i feel this way all the time

5. Baconian says:

   I think we can all relate to this. Thanks for your kind comments, they are appreciated.

6. Thelmy Typoco says:

   a high school guy like you can write so brilliantly honest thing!!! keep it up.