can a world exsist, in this man made abyss

Can a world exsist
In this man made abyss?

If god exsists, he may strike me down
If god exsists, why this world a frown
If god exsists, where has he been,
If god exsists, why this world in sin

I'm wondering how long until I clearly see
I'm wondering how long since I've been me
If time exsists, why my hour glass empty
If time exsists, who took its sandy city

I'm wondering how long since romance
My platonic relation I hope soon advance
If love exsists, than it hides with god
If love exsists, why everything a facade

I'm wondering, if freedom hides with love
Hope someday this world free like dove
If freedom exsists, why my voice on mute
If freedom exsists, why wear this suit

I'm wondering how long there will be laugh
when a child cries to parents last gasp
If laughter exsists, why others expense
If laughter exsists, why this world intense

Stuck in this abyss
Im Wondering if my world still exsists

Responses

3 comments so far.

1. peter hollamby says:

   deep man! really honest! thanks 4 ur comment on my angel! www.myspace.com/peter110788

2. I,C, says:

   if love exist it hides wit god , thats deep , i like that

3. ryventheshadowsoul says:

   Deep. Strongly worded. Very intense.Well written.