My Strongest Weakness

Silky curls,
a strand or two.
Softest skin,
that smell of new.
Sweet perfume from precious you.
Sparkling eyes of purest blue.

Perfect grin
that had no teeth,
Little hands
and tiny feet.
Holding you made my heart weak.
I found strength with every beat.

From this weakness
something grew--
The strongest love
I ever knew.
My strongest weakness will always be,
This child who is the heart of me.

Responses

8 comments so far.

1. Thelmy Typoco says:

   you are very good at putting wonderful words together!!!

2. goon xxx says:

   i love it man!!
   very well done,
   i can tell it means alot

3. nymphadora says:

   This poem is simply wonderful! Keep it up!

4. Amaranth says:

   That is soo cute , and well written too!

5. Sita Strangling says:

   This was touching, and so well put together. You words clearly convey the emotion that is held within them. Thanks for sharing!

6. Cameron Leon says:

   The first six lines leave me in absolute awe, perfect choice selection in every aspect.

7. raechale says:

   this is so great. i love this =]

8. Tatiana says:

   Realmente hermoso...