Remember-Me-Not

Remember me not,
else I will be gone
I will have left you
to carry on.

For in my absence,
You'll think of me.
In the dreams you dream
I'll always be.

Remember me not
and I'll be with you.
I won't be a memory
in all that you do.

Responses

4 comments so far.

1. Jacob Willard says:

   Its really beautiful. I love the rhyme scheme, but its defiantely not only that. It makes loads of sense, and the way it all goes together, its reminds me of petals falling from someones hand. Seriously. Its got a sad tinge to it that takes it the rest of the way. Its a perfect poem.

2. Shorty says:

   Staggering... Really... The concept of being with someone by them -NOT- remembering you is kinda difficult for me to wrap my head around... And to me, that, and the fact that it's just a great piece, make this amazing.

3. Joshua Pilger says:

   It makes total sense to me, and I find this piece a master piece. I loved it enyaw.

4. Malik Ali says:

   that good and touch our feelings and distory the sad ness