Rain

With a thunderous crack,
you fall to the earth
Falling in the thousands,
your force is out to destroy
People walking below,
totally unaware
Your scouts find their marks.
The people are now running about,
seeking cover
Without warning,
your army attacks full force
Drop by drop,
your men hit home
The mission to ruin has been completed
You are victorious.

Responses

3 comments so far.

1. rose gossard says:

   Very good and also very cleverly written. Good job on this

2. Cel Laroque says:

   This poem is well written, but the
   theme is a little awkwardly presented.
   It does, however, have an incredable
   metaphorical writing style.

3. KitWulf says:

   Clever meataphor usage, I like it