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A Unique Day

During the night, words are exchanged;

And tears flow like a water fall.

Emotions grow strong, and a strange silence falls;

This has to stop.

During the next day, my emotions are left at bay;

No one knows my feelings inside.

And they don't know my thoughts to die;

To die is my only way out.

For I am lost and left,

Left to fall in love with a dream.

A dream in which I can not wake;

Nor want to wake.

This is a unique day.

For our love is over.

Never to be found again like a four leaf clover.

This poem was written by Dan Finlayson on Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. psychobillypoet says:

    whoa this sounds like a relationship i had oh not to long ago , it kinda hurts me to read this it brang back a lot of things i wanted to forget xoxoxo lenay

  2. Chantal Smith says:

    gahh, this one made my heart hurt a bit. reminded me of a love i once had. deep dan, i dig it.

  3. Francis Duggan says:

    Good poem you've written here Dan a sad ending maybe but your sadness proves that you did enjoy the good times in your reltionship, keep up your good work. Francis Duggan