Killing Me Softly

A life without love is a pointless life.

A life without a point is like acid on your emotions

A life without emotions is a worthless life.....

How i go on......i still dont know.

All i ask in life......is help to find love.

Yet all i get is a finger pointed in the general direction of love.

If you only knew how it is to not be attractive, only then you can get a feel for this acid feeling on my emotions and life.......

Responses

6 comments so far.

1. KitWulf says:

   Not many people can see it that way though. Sadly enough

2. Christopher Conoley says:

   HOlY SHIT YOURE AWESUm

   u read my mind lol i even have a poem almost iddentical omfg ur amazing

3. Alaska says:

   very good. Your poem mirrors my thoughts and the things i go through and feel. well don.

4. ryventheshadowsoul says:

   Holy Hell... that's deep, so beautifully portrayed.

5. RKA752 says:

   wow

6. Peg Thompson says:

   GREAT poem...i love it