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Old Man

To Mrs. Todd the most wonderful teacher

A man waits for God to take him away.
A messy old man, an old man with gray hair,
Sitting in a cold dark alley all by himself,
Playing sad songs, hungry and alone,
Cold and discouraged,
His family all passed away.
Finally he gives up, lies down.

This poem was written by Dan Finlayson on Nov 22, 2000.

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  1. Bonnie says:

    So much said in so few lines and as sad as it may be it is true. God help us to reach out to others before it's to late. nice write.

  2. Alan Crabtree says:

    Sad but descriptive.