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Under A Fix

Aspects of my wellbeing are determined by how hard on my method of seeing

Random events circumvent through expression in any given moment

Shocking, but certain

As in life, we learn by discovery to strengthen

The understanding is under a fix through a portal on what is self motivating

Without the interest at hand,

Determination is left behind and the subject is not worth mentioning

Which actions deplete through wrong creativity

Our misjudgment on character through a self being lowers our wellbeing

Immorality follows, into an unguided hold on the soul

Which undergoing a misunderstanding of what will be shown

Simply learning from our mistakes takes timing

But in the end it will be told

Yourself to God,

What was first shown

To be a diplomacy, brought forth

But later a misguided ignore

Ignorance on misjudging the soul's attire crudely,

Is a self battle fought almost inevitably

Conservative or liberal, the times have changed

We as a society grow, but through staggering ways

Our shapes differ as the sun will rise and set asunder

Brought forth our gifts where we just stand and just look at each other

To what thought, is this fix?

Is it,

Under a bright but rhetorical portal?

AUTHOR'S COMMENT: Okay, this one is rather difficult and may need to be read a few times. The last line I put “rhetorical portal” and it simply means, understanding each other once we meet.

This poem was written by Jason Partington on Jul 12, 2007.

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