Rating: 4.83333/5

Stronger than Jealousy

But please don’t come back
I’m trying to forget
You run the world free of guilt
While I sit in regret
It’s not that I need you
It’s not that I care
But I just can’t stand
The thought of you there
There with her
Doing what you wish
Chasing after her
Like a hungry fish
It’s not like I need you
At least not anymore
But please
Oh please
don't come back to my door

This poem was written by the lover on Jan 14, 2008.

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10 comments so far.

  1. Florie Ann Labao says:

    I love this lala.GOD BLESS YOU!Keep on writing...

  2. Jason none says:

    it real good like you herd lol i real which i could right like you

  3. wendi J Darling says:

    love this !!!!

  4. 4 SUGAR BEAR says:

    That green eyed monster can be a controlling beast.... release it's chains, and distance its feast. Good Job....
    ~PEACE OUT

  5. Jake LeClair says:

    Good job. You made a lot more poems than i knew. This one is great.

  6. Abbie says:

    awww i love it soo much

  7. Kelly Hernandez says:

    This is a great poem. I can relate to it in a way. 5/5

  8. WILLIAM LOWERY says:

    YES I TO LOVED THIS POEM VERY COOL

  9. Jason Partington says:

    You know, if women would express more of the way they felt in this poetic manner, we'll probably have more commited relationships.

  10. Spiral Fracture says:

    just stumbled on this one. I love the theme of jealousy and this was nicely executed. The Scorpio in me enjoyed it. :)