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what do you want?

TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT
why r u still here
somethime i wish you'd dissappear
your a part of my life i've left behind
you were somehting great when i was blind
but now i see straight and clear
i stare into the future without fear
your really a person i though i was for
but you were a lie and nothing more

This poem was written by the lover on Jan 17, 2008.

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  1. Abbie says:

    wow at least you are not physically saying stuff to that person(who shall not be named). you are speeking ur feelings in poetry than rather going up to them... :P

  2. 4 SUGAR BEAR says:

    I like this....Once blind, but now I see.... these words of thought sound biblically. Good Job Lala La. ~PEACE OUT

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  4. Jake LeClair says:

    I know who that is about. But at least your letting you anger out in a healthy way rather than walking up and yelling at him. Nope, instead you write poetry.

  5. Tianna Mcinnis says:

    Wow this is really amazing and I'm really sorry that you write so painfully but they really are good. <3