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Late Night and Camel Lights

There is a tight tenderness
to the way I clench a cigarette
in my teeth.
Shadows flirt with the few feet of moonlight
in the room as I cup my lighter
to my face.

The tangy tobacco
whirls deathly delicate in my chest.
Ashtray balanced on my naked torso,
I wiggle my scarlet toes form the
catacombs created within the bed sheets.

"Do you want me to stay?" he whispers at my side.
I take a blase` drag. "Nah," I exhale.
I don't do sleepovers.
Rather, I enjoy the trashy comings
and goings reserved traditionally
for a man.

I wonder if ther is any leftover quiche.

This poem was written by Lynds Y. on Oct 01, 2007.

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  1. Frederick Kesner says:

    this is so 'in the moment'
    right up my alley.
    thanks for sharing.
    and thanks for commenting on mine.

  2. andrea says:

    I loved this!

  3. Steve Jones says:

    stark and visual, with a fine blend of reality and eventuality. The best poem i have come accross on this site!

  4. andrea says:

    I have just read this poem again. The imaagery is brilliant!!! "Rather, I enjoy the comings and goings reserved traditionally for a man." I loved this! Spoken from my heart on so many levels. One of the best I've read!
    I hope you are working on more.