This Day

This Day

I never though
This day world come
When I feel more alive
And I could say I survived
I got the sength to get out of bed
And looked out my window
The sun was shing on my face
As I grinned
Relinquishing the drakness
That had spread through my moom
I watched the trees and the birds
Thep people walking by
The chilren playing
And I knew I wasn't an outsider anymore
I never thought this day would come
When i could open my eyes
See clearly what is in front of me
The beginning of my new life.

Responses

3 comments so far.

1. BG10 says:

   I like it, very fresh
   but please be careful about the mistakes you make
   it's dragging your poem down
   it would be so powerful otherwise
   godd job anyway, keep on

2. 4 SUGAR BEAR says:

   I like this, it portrays hope,healing and renewal. This piece inspires and encourages those who are trying to climb out from the pits of depression- to a point in life where they can open there blinds and actually live rather than just exist. ~PEACE OUT

3. Paul Conversano says:

   Good job. You'll smile when you see this
   because you got a comment(:
   i liked it enough
   to waste this long of time
   so good job
   if i left you a comment
   you deserved it