Summer Nightfall
Memorable fare well -
A seaside stroll in summer
Under a red sky.
(This poem is a haiku.)
This poem was written by nymphadora on Jul 05, 2008.
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Memorable fare well -
A seaside stroll in summer
Under a red sky.
(This poem is a haiku.)
This poem was written by nymphadora on Jul 05, 2008.
2 comments so far.
The last line of this haiku really strikes me. I immediately linked "red" to passion, and it makes such a small haiku feel like so much more.
Another lovely piece; one subtle rule of writing haikus to to express the season indirectly. For example, a haiku of mine is:
Nature's confetti -
Bright, wind-blown leaves of color,
wanting a parade.
--Joe