Confusion
The more I try to think,
The less I can.
Does man control the mind,
Or does the mind control man?
This poem was written by nymphadora on Nov 07, 2008.
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The more I try to think,
The less I can.
Does man control the mind,
Or does the mind control man?
This poem was written by nymphadora on Nov 07, 2008.
3 comments so far.
wow thats intresting um...nice little bit there...i like it keep writting poems ...do the poems controle u or
do u control the poems? you tell me...keep going
Usually my feelings control me and they fuel my poems. But I don't think that the poems control me. They help me to "come out of my shell", sort of.
This is my favorite poem by you thus far. It's SO simple, but it's SO powerful. We could DISCUSS this poem, thank you!