i want to talk!

i want to talk
i have no one who'll listen
no one cares
no one lets me share
then you walked into my life
u dragged me from rock bottom
i cudn't believe my luck
now i can...
that knock on the door
the police woman nearly crying
she didn't have to say nothin
to confirm my worst fears
i want to talk
but lightning wont strike twice
i will die alone
soon if i get courage
i don't deserve a natural death
it should be slow and painful
i'll join u soon my angel
love you til the end

Responses

6 comments so far.

1. Jesse Gonzalez says:

   Great!! I really hope that you keep writing. Originality seems to be up your alley.

2. Ellie Caporn says:

   Wow this is great...i really like it.
   Thanx for the comment on mine by the way.
   Your poems are brilliant.

3. Ellie Caporn says:

   Wow this is great...i really like it.
   Thanx for the comment on mine by the way.
   Your poems are brilliant.

4. Ellie Caporn says:

   Wow this is great...i really like it.
   Thanx for the comment on mine by the way.
   Your poems are brilliant.

5. Ellie Caporn says:

   Wow this is great...i really like it.
   Thanx for the comment on mine by the way.
   Your poems are brilliant.

6. Kelly Hernandez says:

   This is so good. It kept me wondering about the story until the end. Very sad..

   Courage and faith are good things to keep in painful times