Forsaken by the Almighty Eyes

The scope of reality
Withheld from the lies
The laws of sanity
Flooded by our cries
Discovered by the saintly
Severed at the ties
Intriqued by the insanity
Forsaken by the almighty eyes

Responses

2 comments so far.

1. ~enyaw~ says:

   This piece made me ask myself a lot of questions. "What is real anyway?""What is right? What is wrong? Who's to say?We're all just trying to survive long enough to die. Maybe it's just me, but when you can write a piece, especially in so few words, that makes the reader think, then hey, you've done well! Great job.....
   ~enyaw~

2. roy k austin says:

   joshua...give us a click sometime..have a browse..
   thankyou for your kind words on some of my work.
   "let the darkness be the light and the stillness the dancing,
   wispher of running streams and winter lightning" ts eliot...

   i like your thoughts. roy on
   http://www.zalivanda.com/id3.html