emptyness

i know your there dont try to ignore me because you no you never did any thing for me it was never fun always a bore just to try to get you to smile you made a promise when you walked down the aisle the angryness inside me started to boil thats when i thought our relaitionship had started to soil im sorry it had to happen this way you no i am but all you were was just a scam theres no excuse what you did

Responses

6 comments so far.

1. Ally says:

   very good and insightful!

2. Ally says:

   i just say what i feel!

3. Ally says:

   i ment to write "very good and insightful"
   on some one elses

4. andrea says:

   very well done!!!!

5. Orpheus . says:

   Young people should stay young people, Allie. Your poems express a rage not your own. Let someone give you a hug.

6. Ally says:

   If you hate my poem so much why dont you just ask me to delete it. wft....