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Violence

Violence
why hurt other people?
to insert a weapon in the body,
could be harmful,why risk someones life,
with a gun or with a knife
how would you feel if someone pulled a trigger to your face
to erase some ones life with a blink of an eye?
some people dont have guilt for doing such thing,
But that is why people need to read my poem.

This poem was written by Ally on Oct 22, 2007.

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  1. Ally says:

    I love this!

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  3. Ally says:

    sorry Allie! I meant to comment under my user name and I used yours! Andrea

  4. andrea says:

    very cool!!!