Surprise

You captivate my soul
Drawing me to you
Leaving a hole
What have I gotten into
Your voice sends shivers down my spine
Eyes that burn into my skin
Creeping up like a vine
Making me burn from within
I can feel you coming near
My legs don't have the strength to run
You whisper softly into my ear
This time you have won
You have an aura that can hypnotize
Taking me by surprise

Copyright ©2008JaclynNalupa

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2 comments so far.

1. ryventheshadowsoul says:

   Thank you very much. It was written quite some time ago. I'll be certain to check out some of your work and post some more of mine as well.

2. lala la says:

   very interesting and deep. i love poems i can connect with and this is definatly one of them...
   nice job=]