sorrowful song

you lie there
motionless with no sound
while the guitarist
strums a tune
to your slowly
dying breaths
you keep your eyes closed
though you still can see
you keep you mouth closed
though you can still breathe
you keep you body still
though you can still move
for your movie has now ended
the music has stopped

Responses

2 comments so far.

1. the lover says:

   you've got some hidden talent girly and i love you for it ...
   keep it up cause you only get better and better with time ^_^*

2. ~enyaw~ says:

   This is beautiful..sad...deep...and so worthy of great feedback...Nice job! Thanks for sharing...
   ~enyaw~