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numb my tongue
feel as one
with my breath
in endlessness

watch me move
don't make me prove
what i'm worth
feel my hurt

share my laughter
watch me cry
tell me stories
with honest eyes

ask me questions
hear my answers
care what i say
don't walk away

and if you feel
it's time to go
don't leave me in shadows
just let me know.

Responses

6 comments so far.

1. Randal Harding says:

   You're really talented Victoria. You take great pics too.

2. soulspin says:

   Thanks so much for the kind compliments!

3. Jeriel tho says:

   Victoria M... i like your poem... it's really nice... erm... mind to ask do you know write lyrics?

4. Joel Morgan says:

   Very lyrical and meaningful. It has significant meaning for me at this moment as I am dealing with one who is walking away casually when in this case goodbye would be the nicest thing you can say. kudos

5. soulspin says:

   Thanks Jeriel and Joel.

   Jeriel, just what's here...

6. marlena bowen says:

   the rhythem is awesome!