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outside the door

i witnessed the moon tonight
it had me in a trance
speaking to me like rain to new flowers
and birds to their young.
it told me a secret
and i saw colors beyond my imagination
and somehow i knew
all at once
how important i really am,
but the secret remains just that.

This poem was written by soulspin on Nov 25, 1999.

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  1. Ralph Rodriguez says:

    thats a good poem, i want to see you naked.

  2. Ralph Rodriguez says:

    sorry i got ahead of myself what i ment to say is that you are a good poet, mabye you should try writing more often.

    p.s.

    i like that part of the poem where you are
    not really sure how important you are, you should know, isnt it like your eyes are wide open, thats some s...t....

  3. soulspin says:

    Well, thanks Ralph.