http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/10202 Brought to you by Poetry with meaning en <p>This is wonderful! The first stanza seemed a bit stilted at first but with the second and third stanzas it became so fluid... and the lines &quot;I want new stories to tell of the moments I fell so in love with you...&quot; </p> <p>It was one of those emotional lines that pulled at my stomach out of nowhere.</p> <p>Great write!</p> <p>Sita</p> Sun, 13 Jul 2008 21:39:53 -0700 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/10202 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/10202 <p>i like it. </p> <p></p> Fri, 18 Jul 2008 22:15:59 -0700 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/10202 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/10202