http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280 Brought to you by Poetry with meaning en <p>Very good and also very cleverly written. Good job on this </p> Tue, 19 Sep 2006 00:50:08 -0700 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280 <p>This poem is well written, but the <br />theme is a little awkwardly presented. <br />It does, however, have an incredable <br />metaphorical writing style.</p> Sun, 24 Sep 2006 17:55:16 -0700 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280 <p>Clever meataphor usage, I like it</p> Thu, 01 Feb 2007 09:34:04 -0800 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280 http://poetrywithmeaning.com/poems/show/1280