Comments for poem: A Ghostly Flag

Comment by Jeanne Lahn

Mon, 16 Oct 2006 19:38:44 -0700

This is a beautifully articulated retrease on surrendering in war. It has great visual acuity! Can't wait for more!

Wed, 18 Oct 2006 11:28:24 -0700

Great!!!

Wed, 18 Oct 2006 16:13:06 -0700

Too many similes.
And what is "sanguinary blood"?
Good poem otherwise.
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Wed, 18 Oct 2006 16:14:01 -0700

Too many similes.
And what is "sanguinary blood"?
Good poem otherwise.
84%

Thu, 19 Oct 2006 05:47:02 -0700

I really liked this poem that you have created, and I hope that you'll continue to keep up the great work. Peace.