Comments for poem: God: A Conversation

Comment by Genevieve Campbell

Tue, 22 May 2007 18:17:05 -0700

this is amazing. i love iit. you are very talented.
you should check out mine and tell me what you think.
=]

Comment by Candi S

Tue, 22 May 2007 18:25:27 -0700

i absolutely love this poem. very well written.

Comment by ryventheshadowsoul

Tue, 22 May 2007 20:54:22 -0700

This was incredible. It was brilliant. You honestly have no idea how cool this is. I absolutely love this.I can't wait to read some more of your work.

Later

Comment by Scott Chadderdon

Wed, 23 May 2007 16:45:13 -0700

Hi my name is Scott Chadderdon I wrote a poem along the same lines as yours it's called Journey. I wish you would read it and let me know what you think. As far as your poem God:A Conversation I really like the way you rhyme it seems to be a lost art. You must have spent a lot of time thinking before you wrote. you are very right when you say that God Isn't the direct cause of our suffering. And that he remembers us after we die.you must have studied the Bible or you wouldn't know this. One last thing he remembers us by Jesus's promise to call all those in the memorial tombs to come out.

Comment by Evan Forrester

Wed, 23 May 2007 17:09:28 -0700

You know something? I wrote this in a matter of a few minutes. It just flowed out and I barely could keep up with it. I have studied religion, both as religion and as history. I'm not a real good attendee of services, but do feel that there is a Supreme Essence.

Comment by Scott Chadderdon

Thu, 24 May 2007 09:51:59 -0700

Thanks.

Comment by Joshua Pilger

Thu, 24 May 2007 22:55:02 -0700

That is a very capturing poem, even for a non believer like me. Excellent job. 5/5