Comments for poem: As I Lay Dying

Comment by Jess

Wed, 23 May 2007 17:13:28 -0700

This is really sad. It touched me because my aunt is dying right now infact. It meant a lot. Excellent writing :)

Comment by Kelly Hernandez

Wed, 23 May 2007 18:32:38 -0700

I like this poem alot, it is really sad, but I relate to it somehow, it draws me in. Good job

Comment by ryventheshadowsoul

Fri, 25 May 2007 21:01:24 -0700

I like it...it is truly about sadness and pain. Getting lost within yourself. Very good.

Bye

Comment by ~enyaw~

Fri, 08 Jun 2007 20:21:05 -0700

Wonderfully written piece. I especially liked the way you described being on life support without actually saying it.
You can tell that it was written from your heart to your reader's heart. Very emotional read and thank you for sharing a piece of your heart....
~enyaw~