Comments for poem: My Very First Poem...........Heartbreak

Comment by Orpheus .

Fri, 21 Dec 2007 15:22:48 -0800

Pity if this is your first poem. I would it were that you wrote something that celebrated love, not heartbreak.

Comment by Vickie Rosen

Fri, 21 Dec 2007 18:15:10 -0800

at this time i just had a heartbreak so i wanted to write about it. the guy that broke my heart was my inspiration. he sung me a song and i wanted to start writing poetry. i dont know what love is so i cant really write about celebrating it. im only 14.

Comment by raechale

Fri, 21 Dec 2007 23:17:57 -0800

though heart breaks are never fun to deal with i find that these types of events are excellent fuel for poems as well
i often write about my close encounters with the emotion love though i don't think that i have felt the feeling in full bloom i am about the same age as you so i know how you feel

please feel free to read something of mine i would really like to know what some one near my age thinks