Comments for poem: what do you want?

Comment by 4 SUGAR BEAR

Thu, 17 Jan 2008 15:21:28 -0800

I like this....Once blind, but now I see.... these words of thought sound biblically. Good Job Lala La. ~PEACE OUT

Comment by raechale

Thu, 17 Jan 2008 16:27:38 -0800

Comment by Jake LeClair

Fri, 18 Jan 2008 05:48:21 -0800

I know who that is about. But at least your letting you anger out in a healthy way rather than walking up and yelling at him. Nope, instead you write poetry.

Comment by Abbie

Wed, 23 Jan 2008 15:06:24 -0800

wow at least you are not physically saying stuff to that person(who shall not be named). you are speeking ur feelings in poetry than rather going up to them... :P

Comment by Tianna Mcinnis

Tue, 11 Mar 2008 06:15:09 -0700

Wow this is really amazing and I'm really sorry that you write so painfully but they really are good. <3